Who is your superhero?
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There are many people who have talent in the world such as Steve Jobs and in terms of sports. I also respect their achieve because they fulfill their dream and I want to be someone like them. However, I think my superhero is my family. Most of all, they always give me motivation, courage, and confidence making my dream. Also, when I didn’t something well, they never judge anything. They just tell positive word.
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There are many people who have talent in the world such as Steve Jobs and in terms of sports.
>> There are many people who have talent in the world such as Steve Jobs, and in terms of sports too.
I also respect their achieve because they fulfill their dream and I want to be someone like them.
>> I also respect their achievements because they fulfilled their dreams. I want to be someone like them.
However, I think my superhero is my family.
>> Correct.
Most of all, they always give me motivation, courage, and confidence making my dream.
>> Correct.
Also, when I didn’t something well, they never judge anything. They just tell positive word.
>> Also, when I didn’t do something well, they never judge me. They just give me some positive words and advice.
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