Who makes a better leader: someone who is loved, or someone who is feared? Take a position and expla
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I think someone who is loved is a better leader. Because people respect a leader who is loved more than a leader who is feared. And if a leader who is loved governs, people think freely and make creative expression.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Owen.
Thank you for doing your homework. Even though you and I will
not meet today, I hope you can still use English in better ways.
If you are drunk, then drink a lot of water, OK?^.^
See you soon!
~~Teacher Erine~~
I think someone who is loved is a better leader.
>> Correct
Because people respect a leader who is loved more than a leader who is feared.
>> Correct
And if a leader who is loved governs, people think freely and make creative expression.>> And if a leader who is loved governs, people will think freely and make creative expressions.
Thank you for doing your homework. Even though you and I will
not meet today, I hope you can still use English in better ways.
If you are drunk, then drink a lot of water, OK?^.^
See you soon!
~~Teacher Erine~~
I think someone who is loved is a better leader.
>> Correct
Because people respect a leader who is loved more than a leader who is feared.
>> Correct
And if a leader who is loved governs, people think freely and make creative expression.>> And if a leader who is loved governs, people will think freely and make creative expressions.
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