Who makes you laugh?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am a person who enjoys every day.
Especially when my companion makes a odd face, I laugh too much.
He often gives me odd facial expressions. Then I laugh and laugh again.
I guess I laugh a lot when I\'m with a student and talking to them.
I always seem to smile and laugh more than 10 times a day.
In fact, I can\'t count how much I laugh a day.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Thank you for remembering your past lessons.
Take note of the correction on the balance in your sentences.
We will discuss it more in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I am a person who enjoys every day.
>> Correct
Especially when my companion makes a odd face, I laugh too much.
Especially when my companion makes a odd face, I laugh too much.
>> Especially when my companion makes an odd face, I laugh too hard.
He often gives me odd facial expressions.
He often gives me odd facial expressions.
>> Correct
Then I laugh and laugh again.
>> Then I just laugh and laugh again.
I guess I laugh a lot when I\'m with a student and talking to them.
I guess I laugh a lot when I\'m with a student and talking to them.
>> I guess I laugh a lot when I\'m with students and I\'m talking to them.
I always seem to smile and laugh more than 10 times a day.
I always seem to smile and laugh more than 10 times a day.
>> Correct
In fact, I can\'t count how much I laugh a day.
In fact, I can\'t count how much I laugh a day.
>> In fact, I can\'t count how much I laugh in a day.
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