Who or what are you keeping tabs on?
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Good morning, [이름]!
What a nice surprise!
I ought to thank you for finding some time to drop by the composition board.
Now it is crystal clear that you really are into politics. You are even keeping tabs on updates about your upcoming local elections. As the cliche goes, \"VOTE WISELY\"!
For those people who opt to abstain, I suppose they have this thought that safety is in being obscure or nothing to some extent.
It\'s like wanting to be powerful is meaningless.
My simple take on this is that freedom and restrictions are not well-balanced.
If I am going to take a close look on something or just anything, I am certain to see chaos.
Perhaps, your wife\'s pessimism has gotten into me. LOL
I also tend to overread such matters, so please bear with me.
I will be keeping tabs on this through you, [이름], if you don\'t mind. Always keep me posted then!
And as for the structure of your composition, please count the \"CORRECT\" marks below.
I even have this feeling that you are a better writer than I am.
Now I\'m looking forward to reading more of your compositions.
Keep on writing, [이름]!
_Klein
P.S.
*Please send my regards to your wife!
*How I hope that our future leaders are the true philanthropists.
These days I\'m keeping tabs on the news about the local election in Korea.
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OR >> These days, I\'m keeping tabs on the news about the local elections in Korea.
I\'m quite interested in watching the election campaign for mayors and governors.
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OR >> I\'m quite interested in watching the election campaigns of mayors and governors.
I used to vote for the candidate who would make a public commitment to set up the social protection for the marginalized and the poor.
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In this election I try to pay attention to the competition between Park, the present mayor of Seoul and Chung, the candidate of the ruling party.
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I always encourage my wife to vote actively in all elections because my wife is very pessimistic about our politics in Korea.
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OR >> I always encourage my wife to vote actively in all elections because she is very pessimistic about politics in Korea.
>> I always encourage my wife to exercise her rights to suffrage because she is very pessimistic about Korean politics.
If we give up our rights to vote easily, it would make our political situations worse than before.
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I think that the people who don\'t vote can\'t have a right to blame and criticize politians who set out wrong policies.
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OR >> I think that those people who abstain don\'t have the tight to blame and criticize politicians who set out unwanted policies.
Anyway, it will be considerably thrilling to watch the result of this election.
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I hope that candidates who are really willing to protect the rights of the disadvantaged will be elected in this election.
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OR >> I hope that the candidates who are really willing to protect the rights of the disadvantaged will be elected this time.
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