Who or what do you consider yourself?

2020-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

A few days ago, I heard the news that said that the number of Korean positive cases of coronavirus had begun to level off after rising steeply. The news seems to give people comfort which makes them exercise less social-distancing and self-quarantine. I wondered why people just began to risk to go to a busy place when the Covid-19 have yet to end. First, they might be sick and tired of staying at home. They\'ve been doing pretty much everything they can do at home. Second, they feel spending more time with family makes themselves become a bad person. Because just being with them for longer could cause them to have more arguments. For those two reasons, there are becoming more people who can\'t stand staying at home. And I\'ve been telling them not to go out until we are sure that the Covid-19 is completely gone. The next thing I knew, I saw the irony. I don\'t consider myself a liar but I did, and even did what I warned not to do. I felt deeply ashamed.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]
Time is flying so fast like a blink of an eye. I just hope this week is going smoothly with you!
You\'ve done a great job! I have to say, each passing day that we\'re having classes there are some changes in you. It may not lead you right away to the perfection and mastery of the language but at least you\'re getting there step by step! Never give up and just keep yourself motivated!

Take care!!!
T. Jeny


A few days ago, I heard the news that said that the number of Korean positive cases of coronavirus had begun to level off after rising steeply.
>>A few days ago, I heard the news that the number of positive cases of coronavirus in Korea had begun to level off after rising steeply.
The news seems to give people comfort which makes them exercise less social-distancing and self-quarantine.
>>correct
I wondered why people just began to risk to go to a busy place when the Covid-19 have yet to end.
>>I wonder why people just began to take the risk in going to busy places when the Covid-19 hasn\'t ended yet.
First, they might be sick and tired of staying at home.
>>First, they might get sick or maybe tired of staying at home.
They\'ve been doing pretty much everything they can do at home.
>>They\'ve been doing pretty much everything at home.
Second, they feel spending more time with family makes themselves become a bad person.
>>correct
Because just being with them for longer could cause them to have more arguments.
>>Because just being with them for a long time could cause them to have more arguments.
For those two reasons, there are becoming more people who can\'t stand staying at home.
>>For those two reasons, more people couldn\'t stand staying at home.
And I\'ve been telling them not to go out until we are sure that the Covid-19 is completely gone.
>>I have been telling my family and friends not to go out until we are sure that the Covid-19 is completely gone.
The next thing I knew, I saw the irony.
>>correct
I don\'t consider myself a liar but I did, and even did what I warned not to do.
>>I don\'t consider myself a liar but I did the same thing and even did what I was warned not to do.
I felt deeply ashamed.
>>correct

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