Who or what influenced you to love reading?
학생이 쓴 원문
My neighbor older sister, who I respected and followed, influenced me.
She was always reading books. She became my role model.
She is the first mentor of my life to this day.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I love how you shared that your older neighbor influenced your love for reading. It’s truly inspiring how someone you respected so much could guide you toward such a valuable habit. Your story reminds us how mentors and role models can shape our lives in beautiful ways. Keep fostering your love for books. It’s something that will enrich your life endlessly!
~ T. Lia
My neighbor older sister, who I respected and followed, influenced me.
>> My older neighbor, who I respected and followed, influenced me.
She was always reading books. She became my role model.
>> CORRECT
She is the first mentor of my life to this day.
>> She is the first mentor of my life and remains so to this day.
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