Who or what motivates you in doing better in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Whenever we all take park in the session every other month, which was held by my wife\'s company, we are strongy motivated from the contents of lecture, progressing of session and etc...
Secially, the contents with playing the video are remarkably gave us to accelerate our goal without hesitating.
Fianally, it makes high sales volume of Nuskin korea in multinational market.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ethan!
Thank you for sharing what motivates you.
I\'m glad that you\'re able to participate in sessions which makes you feel more motivated about reaching your goals without hesitating.
I hope that as time passes by, we\'ll keep on reaching our goals for success. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Whenever we all take part in the session every other month, which is held by my wife\'s company, we are strongly motivated from the contents of the lecture, progress of session, etc.
>> Or: We are strongly motivated from the contents of the lecture, progress of session, etc. whenever we all take part in the session held by my wife\'s company every other month.
Secially, the contents with playing the video are remarkably gave us to accelerate our goal without hesitating.
Secially, the contents with playing the video are remarkably gave us to accelerate our goal without hesitating.
>> Specially the contents while the video is playing remarkably make us to accelerate our goal without hesitating.
Fianally, it makes high sales volume of Nuskin korea in multinational market.
Fianally, it makes high sales volume of Nuskin korea in multinational market.
>> Finally, it makes high sales volume of Nuskin Korea in multinational market.
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