Who pays
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Korean people give some money instead of presents when they attend to congratulate someone\'s wedding ceremony. With the collected money, the newlywed couples can pay for what in their weddings. The rest money is usually used to their honeymoon trips.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing with me regarding weddings in Korea! It\'s a really interesting culture and like what I\'ve said during our class, it\'s quite different from the one here in my country.
- T. Caitlyn
Korean people give some money instead of presents when they attend to congratulate someone\'s wedding ceremony.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: In Korean culture, people often give money instead of presents when they attend to congratulate someone\'s wedding ceremony.
With the collected money, the newlywed couples can pay for what in their weddings.
>> With the collected money, the newlywed couples can pay for various expenses at their weddings.
The rest money is usually used to their honeymoon trips.
>> The remaining money is usually used for their honeymoon trips.
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