Who\'re you? Santa C.! Who\'s that? That\'s me! No way! Yes way! Ha, you bet! Ho ho ho, \"you\'ll\"
학생이 쓴 원문
In our tiny village, Sante Claus is real. But he\'s not wearing costumes like city santas do. He is real and magical! We visit Sants\'s cabin and feed each of Santa\'s deers (the riendeers are a mistake) a sugar lump and especially two for the antler-glowing (the nose-glowing is a mistake) one. But today, which was 2 days before X-mas, Santa was away to a country that was X-mas in freezing winter. He returned having an extreme cold and couldn\'t even give gifts to that country. He couldn\'t give them to us too. I thought, \"I should be the Disguise Child Santa! Ho ho ho!\", and I did. After checking if any of the other 5 familys have a thought about it, I waited till midnight, sharing my plans to Santa. He let me have 12 gifts, 2 for each of the 6 cabins. (One cabin is my family\'s) I was way slimmer than Santa and also lighter, so I slipped down the roof flap (the chimney is a mistake) without a sound comfortablely. It was interesting that I thought it\'ll be. Ho ho. Ha! Santa should thank me!
강사 첨삭
Hello Heather, glad to know that Santa Claus really exists. Many children believe in the magic of Christmas because of Santa Claus. It is okay to believe in something. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you!~
T. Lyn
In our tiny village, Sante Claus is real.
>>In our small town, Santa Claus is real.
But he\'s not wearing costumes like city santas do.
>>But he doesn\'t wear a costume like the city Santa.
He is real and magical!
>>Correct.
We visit Sants\'s cabin and feed each of Santa\'s deers (the riendeers are a mistake) a sugar lump and especially two for the antler-glowing (the nose-glowing is a mistake) one.
>>We visit Santa\'s cabin and feed each of Santa\'s deer, I think they are not reindeers that have sugar lumps and shiny nose.
But today, which was 2 days before X-mas, Santa was away to a country that was X-mas in freezing winter.
>>But today, two days before Christmas, Santa left the country where Christmas is held in cold winter.
He returned having an extreme cold and couldn\'t even give gifts to that country.
>>He came down with a bad cold and could not bring gifts to the country.
He couldn\'t give them to us too.
>>He couldn\'t give them to us either.
I thought, \"I should be the Disguise Child Santa! Ho ho ho!\", and I did.
>>I thought, that I\'m going to be Santa in disguise, Ho Ho HO, and I did.
After checking if any of the other 5 familys have a thought about it, I waited till midnight, sharing my plans to Santa.
>>After checking to see if the other five families had an idea, I waited until midnight to tell Santa about my plan.
He let me have 12 gifts, 2 for each of the 6 cabins.
>>He gave me 12 gifts, two for each of the six cabins.
(One cabin is my family\'s)
>>One of the cabins belongs to my family.
I was way slimmer than Santa and also lighter, so I slipped down the roof flap (the chimney is a mistake) without a sound comfortablely.
>>I an much slimmer and ligther than Santa, so I slide down the roof cover silently and comfortably.
It was interesting that I thought it\'ll be.
>>I thought it would work, so it was interesting, Ho Ho Ha.
Santa should thank me!
>>Correct.
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