Who\'s your favorite actor? Why do you like him?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite actor is Kim Yoon Seok in the movie \"NORYANG\".
Because he acted the role of Yi Sun shin, he is very great in the movie.
I remembered the scene of before die.
강사 첨삭
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Here\'s your revised essay. Thank you very much for sending it. Please take a look at the corrections below, especially how I combined your first two sentences. Have a good one!
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Who\'s your favorite actor? Why do you like him?
My favorite actor is Kim Yoon Seok in the movie \"NORYANG\". Because he acted the role of Yi Sun shin,
>> My favorite actor is Kim Yoon Seok in the movie \"NORYANG\" because he played the role of Yi Sun Shin.
he is very great in the movie.
>> He did great in the movie.
I remembered the scene of before die.
>> I remember the scene before he died.
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