Who should be held more responsible for data breaches: hackers or companies with weak security?
학생이 쓴 원문
Who should be held more responsible for data breaches: hackers or companies with weak security?
I believe It should be held ours responsibility.
All is composed of combining a little things. We are like atom in consist of it.
It will be made of strong walls on the area of security, if we follow the personal rules well in our small habits.
We provoke boring to follow the small rules , because it’s considers blinding it and petty things.
So. my company installed many programs for protecting the data from critical attacks of our systems.
It must be keep the data, in contrast, the installed systems doesn’t work well, at the first time.
So we are always angry and point to improve the IT service process.
강사 첨삭
I believe It should be held ours responsibility.
>> I believe it should be our responsibility.
All is composed of combining a little things. We are like atom in consist of it.
>> Everything is made by combining small things, and we are like atoms that make up the whole.
It will be made of strong walls on the area of security, if we follow the personal rules well in our small habits.
>> A strong security system can be built if we follow personal rules and maintain good habits.
>> A strong security system can be built if we follow personal rules and maintain good habits.
We provoke boring to follow the small rules , because it’s considers blinding it and petty things.
>> We often find it boring to follow small rules because they seem trivial or insignificant.
So. my company installed many programs for protecting the data from critical attacks of our systems.
>> That’s why my company has installed many programs to protect data from critical attacks on our systems.
It must be keep the data, in contrast, the installed systems doesn’t work well, at the first time.
>> The data must be kept secure; however, the installed systems didn’t work well at first.
>> The data must be kept secure; however, the installed systems didn’t work well at first.
So we are always angry and point to improve the IT service process.
>> Therefore, we are often frustrated and point out improvements to the IT service process.
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