Who was your greatest hero as a child?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a child, there were many heros to me.
But my greatest hero as a child was my teacher in the first grade in my elementary school, I think.
So I am working in the univ., now.
강사 첨삭
Mr. [이름]! Happy Wednesday! ~~
Thank you very much for the great effort in writing this composition.
I hope this will help you improve your grammar day by day~~
See you later in class.
__T. Myra :)
CORRECTIONS:
When I was a child, there were many heros to me.
>>When I was a child, there were many heroes for me.
But my greatest hero as a child was my teacher in the first grade in my elementary school, I think.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> But my greatest hero as a child was my first grade teacher in my elementary school.
So I am working in the univ., now.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>>She/He inspired me a lot that\'s why I\'m working in the university.
Thank you very much for the great effort in writing this composition.
I hope this will help you improve your grammar day by day~~
See you later in class.
__T. Myra :)
CORRECTIONS:
When I was a child, there were many heros to me.
>>When I was a child, there were many heroes for me.
But my greatest hero as a child was my teacher in the first grade in my elementary school, I think.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> But my greatest hero as a child was my first grade teacher in my elementary school.
So I am working in the univ., now.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>>She/He inspired me a lot that\'s why I\'m working in the university.
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