Who was your most memorable teacher? (Bad or good)
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Good evening, Sir [이름]!
Happy Tuesday!
How are you today? How about your wife? I hope that both of you are doing great.
Thank you very much for sharing about your most memorable teacher.
I guess all of the people have a favorite teacher.
They inspired and helped us to be a good person that we are now.
We should never forget those people who were there for us.
I appreciate your time and effort. Have a good day.
Teacher Nina
When I was in elementary school, there was a notorious teacher for his brutal and merciless corporal punishment.
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>> OR: When I was an elementary school student, there was a notorious teacher for his brutal and merciless corporal punishment.
Whenever a student made a mistake, he held his/her both ears and lifted the student up in to the air way above floor and flung him/her away on to the ground.
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Many students got their ears to tear down and bleed.
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Thinking of the current strict regulation that bans any types of corporal punishment in school, his way of punishment crossed the line.
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Except the way of his punishment, he was a quite good teacher in the sense that he loved and taught his students with enthusiasm.
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Another teacher who I still remember and miss very much is the teacher in middle school.
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>> OR: Another teacher who I still remember and miss very much is my teacher in middle school.
She just graduated from college and had an assignment in my middle school.
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She encouraged me all the time whenever I felt depressed and even wrote me letters after I entered into high school.
>> She encouraged me all the time whenever I felt depressed and even wrote me letters after I entered high school.
She showed her love to all the students, especially those who was adrift due to unforeseeable future.
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