Who was your most memorable teacher? (Bad or good)

2015-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was in elementary school, there was a notorious teacher for his brutal and merciless corporal punishment. Whenever a student made a mistake, he held his/her both ears and lifted the student up in to the air way above floor and flung him/her away on to the ground. Many students got their ears to tear down and bleed. Thinking of the current strict regulation that bans any types of corporal punishment in school, his way of punishment crossed the line. Except the way of his punishment, he was a quite good teacher in the sense that he loved and taught his students with enthusiasm. Another teacher who I still remember and miss very much is the teacher in middle school. She just graduated from college and had an assignment in my middle school. She encouraged me all the time whenever I felt depressed and even wrote me letters after I entered into high school. She showed her love to all the students, especially those who was adrift due to unforeseeable future.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Sir [이름]!

Happy Tuesday!

How are you today? How about your wife? I hope that both of you are doing great.

Thank you very much for sharing about your most memorable teacher.

I guess all of the people have a favorite teacher.

They inspired and helped us to be a good person that we are now.

We should never forget those people who were there for us.

I appreciate your time and effort. Have a good day.
Teacher Nina


When I was in elementary school, there was a notorious teacher for his brutal and merciless corporal punishment.

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>> OR: When I was an elementary school student, there was a notorious teacher for his brutal and merciless corporal punishment.

Whenever a student made a mistake, he held his/her both ears and lifted the student up in to the air way above floor and flung him/her away on to the ground.

>> correct

Many students got their ears to tear down and bleed.

>> correct

Thinking of the current strict regulation that bans any types of corporal punishment in school, his way of punishment crossed the line.

>> correct

Except the way of his punishment, he was a quite good teacher in the sense that he loved and taught his students with enthusiasm.

>> correct

Another teacher who I still remember and miss very much is the teacher in middle school.

>> correct

>> OR: Another teacher who I still remember and miss very much is my teacher in middle school.

She just graduated from college and had an assignment in my middle school.

>> correct

She encouraged me all the time whenever I felt depressed and even wrote me letters after I entered into high school.

>> She encouraged me all the time whenever I felt depressed and even wrote me letters after I entered high school.

She showed her love to all the students, especially those who was adrift due to unforeseeable future.

>> correct

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