Who/what is your daily dose of happiness?
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You\'re such an animal lover. Do you have a pet? or if not, would you consider petting an animal at home? That is something we should talk about next time. See you!
~Teacher Eunice
what is your daily dose of happiness?
>>> What is your daily dose of happiness?
I love animals so I like watch animal videos.
>>> I love animals, so I like watching animal videos.
When I go home from school or school from home, I usually watch animal videos and I get happiness from it.
>>> When I got home from school, I usually watch animal videos and I get happiness from it.
There is a cat that I really like.
>>> Correct!
She is a star in Instagram.
>>> She is a star on Instagram.
I like watch her daily on instagram.
>>> I like watching her daily on Instagram.
She is so famous that a book about her was published.
>>> She is so famous that a book about her has been published.
Of course I bought the book.
>>> Of course, I bought the book.
Anyway I feel happiness from animals video !
>>> Anyway, watching animal videos make me happy.
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