Who would you say is the most influential person in your country at the moment? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
\"Yoo JaeSeok\" is the most influential person in Korea.
He is the most popular MC/comedian in my country. He has been got the highest rank in Analysis about celebrity\'s influence, almost every year. I guess the reason why he be loved is his diligent character. Since he debut as comedian, he has been developed his knowledge and physical fitness even he had extremely busy schedule.
I also respect him, because he never hesitate to challenge. Usually, the celebrity who already has the fame is not willing to challenge to new thing. The most of TV shows which Yoo JaeSeaok host are different from the other shows. Except the Running Man, his shows bring sensational response for their creativeness. I especially recommend \'Yoo quiz block\'. In this show, Yoo JaeSeok walk down the street, and talk with the passengers, who faced him coincidental. I like to watch Yoo JaeSeok\'s shows, so I wish that he keep do his work as long as he can.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Ms. [Name]!
Yeah, I\'ve seen his reality TV show and I think that\'s Running Man.
I was actually into that TV show a few years ago because they are actually facing different challenges and it\'s fun to watch.
Anyhow, thanks for sharing :)
\"Yoo JaeSeok\" is the most influential person in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
He is the most popular MC/comedian in my country.
>>CORRECT!
He has been got the highest rank in Analysis about celebrity\'s influence, almost every year.
>>He received the highest rating in the analysis of celebrity influence almost every year.
I guess the reason why he be loved is his diligent character.
>>I think the reason why he is loved is because of his diligent character.
Since he debut as comedian, he has been developed his knowledge and physical fitness even he had extremely busy schedule.
>>Since his debut as a comedian, he has developed knowledge and stamina despite his extremely busy schedule.
I also respect him, because he never hesitate to challenge.
>>I also admire him. Because he never hesitates to challenge.
Usually, the celebrity who already has the fame is not willing to challenge to new thing.
>>Usually a celebrity who has already gained that reputation doesn\'t try a challenge or something new.
The most of TV shows which Yoo JaeSeaok host are different from the other shows.
>>Most of the TV shows where Yoo JaeSeok hosted are different from other shows.
Except the Running Man, his shows bring sensational response for their creativeness.
>>CORRECT!
I especially recommend \'Yoo quiz block\'.
>>CORRECT!
In this show, Yoo JaeSeok walk down the street, and talk with the passengers, who faced him coincidental.
>>CORRECT!
I like to watch Yoo JaeSeok\'s shows, so I wish that he keep do his work as long as he can.
>>I like watching Yoo Jae-seok\'s shows, and I hope he continues to work hard.
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