Who you are?

The world is where you and I are living together. That's why I was named Yumi.(It's just a joking) There is a waman who loves people, freedom, songs, travel, and justice-that's me. I always dream to live with those things. I will do my best everyday, dreaming a beautiful life.

[이름], The first sentence was funny. I didn’t get it at first so I read over again. Then I got it. “YouMe-Yumi” right? Hahahaha! Anyway, I am so glad to read some of your compositions here. The previous one I checked a while back was interesting. Now, this one is also. I like your hopefulness of a happy life! I think you are a positive person. I agree that this life is worth living. It really depends on how we see things and how happy we make our minds to be to live in this world.  XOXO, Jenny   Here are some revisions: The world is where you and I are living together. That's why I was named Yumi.(It's just a joking) >> This world is where you and I are living that’s why I was named “Yumi”. (It’s just a joke!)There is a waman who loves people, freedom, songs, travel, and justice-that's me. >> There’s a woman who loves people, freedom, songs, traveling and justice. That person is me.I always dream to live with those things. >>I’ve always dreamt of living with those things. I will do my best everyday, dreaming a beautiful life. >> I will do my best everyday and dream of a beautiful life.