Wht I like my city
학생이 쓴 원문
I like my city.
That is because ma city has so many good people.
My second reason is my city has so many buildings.
My third reason is my city is very rich.
Finally, my city has so many playgrounds.
강사 첨삭
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- Teacher Debbie
I like my city.
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because ma city has so many good people.
>> That is because my city has so many good people.
My second reason is my city has so many buildings.
>> In addition, it has so many buildings.
My third reason is my city is very rich. Finally, my city has so many playgrounds.
>> It also has so many playgrounds. My city is very rich.
Please review the corrections to improve more.
- Teacher Debbie
I like my city.
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because ma city has so many good people.
>> That is because my city has so many good people.
My second reason is my city has so many buildings.
>> In addition, it has so many buildings.
My third reason is my city is very rich. Finally, my city has so many playgrounds.
>> It also has so many playgrounds. My city is very rich.
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