Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
What do they learn through an hour romance prepared by parents?
Why do parents try to let escape their kids?
They are not in their right mind.
I wonder that they want to their kids as mama\'s boy and mama\'s girl.
So I hate the singer because she is making bad trends in society.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for this, and I also wonder why some parents have a very lenient way of raising their kids. We may have different parenting styles, but parents should be smart enough not to push their kids into an unsafe future.
Aki~
What do they learn through an hour romance prepared by parents?
>>> What do they learn through an hour of romance prepared by parents?
Why do parents try to let escape their kids?
>>> Why do parents try to give freedom to their kids?
They are not in their right mind.
>>> CORRECT!
I wonder that they want to their kids as mama\'s boy and mama\'s girl.
>>> I wonder if they want their kids to as mama\'s boy and mama\'s girl.
So I hate the singer because she is making bad trends in society.
>>> CORRECT!
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