Why are children so interested in dinosaurs from a very young age?
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I think that children are interested in dinosaurs because of their power. Children around 6 just like strong creatures like shark, crocodile, dragon. I think that dinosaurs are one of them.
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I think that children are interested in dinosaurs because of their power.
>> correct
Children around 6 just like strong creatures like shark, crocodile, dragon. I think that dinosaurs are one of them.
>> Children around 6 just like strong creatures, such as sharks, crocodiles, or dragons. I think that dinosaurs are one of them.
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