Why are gifts important in our life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Gifts are important to us because they make us happy. Gifts have love, care, and our true feeling in it. Sometimes when a person has a strong feeling on you, which may be \'love\' or actually \'hate\'. When they love you, they give something you like for example a tamagotchi. But when a person hates you, they give you something you would never like. Gifts might change our feeling to the person who gave you the gifts. Gifts are very important things.
강사 첨삭
Good day to you, Kristine! I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. I agree that gifts are important. Regardless if they are expensive or not, it is the thought that counts. Remember that. It is almost your birthday. I wish you all the best! ~T. Lyn
Gifts are important to us because they make us happy.
>>Correct. For me, gifts are important because they can make me so happy.
Gifts have love, care, and our true feeling in it.
>>Gifts contain love, care, and our true feelings.
Sometimes when a person has a strong feeling on you, which may be \'love\' or actually \'hate\'.
>>Sometimes, when a person has a strong feeling for you, it can be \"love\" or \"hate.\"
When they love you, they give something you like for example a tamagotchi.
>>When these people love you, they give you something you like such as \"Tamagotchi.\"
But when a person hates you, they give you something you would never like.
>>But when a person hates you, they give you something you will never like.
Gifts might change our feeling to the person who gave you the gifts.
>>Gifts can change our feeling about the person who gave you the gift.
Gifts are very important things.
>>That\'s why for me, gifts are very important.
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