Why are goals important?

Hi, Yeong!^^
Thank you for answering your homework but I want you to check the sentences very carefully.

Try to practice them as well.

>> Why are goals are important?

 I am going to tell you 3reson about why are goals important.

>> I am going to tell you three reasons about why our goals are important!

First. Goals give me focus. I can watch exact the sense of direction is what allow my mind to focus on a target.

>> First, setting my goals makes me more focus because it allows me to be concentrated on the target.

 Second. Goals allow my to measure progress. By setting goals for myself I can able to measure my progress because I can always fix my weakness.
>> Second, it allows me to measure my improvement and progress by setting of my goals to correct my weaknesses.

 Third. Goals give me motivation. The root of all the motivation or inspiration I can fell in my entire life are goals.

>> Third, it allows to motivate myself so I can achieve my goals.

 Those things are making me more focus on my life Goals and it can be possible achieving my goals.. 
 >> I think those 3 reason will make my more focus to achieve my goals in life.