Why are greetings important

2025-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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I think greetings important because it is the first image of someones. People can start conversation with greetings. Also say hello brightly make people happy.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Sarah^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
You\'re totally right about those things.
_.T SHAY^^
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I think greetings important because it is the first image of someones.
>>I think greetings are important because they give the first impression of someone.
People can start conversation with greetings.
>>People can start conversations with greetings.
Also say hello brightly make people happy.
>>Also, saying hello brightly make people happy.

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