Why are manners important?
학생이 쓴 원문
Humans are living in a society. We can\'t live alone. To live with others, there are rules and manners to live happily and peacefully. I think that the reason why we should keep manners is for ourselves. If I keep and cure manners in the public, the other people realize keeping a manner makes people feel good. And the people also might want to do like that for other person. Keeping manners look that it is for others but actually it returns to ourselves well.
강사 첨삭
Hello there So Young!
Thank you for answering your homework for today!
I also agree with you!
If you keep your manners it also shows that you are an educated and proper person.
Have a good night!
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Humans are living in a society.
>>CORRECT
We can\'t live alone.
>>CORRECT
To live with others, there are rules and manners to live happily and peacefully.
>>CORRECT
I think that the reason why we should keep manners is for ourselves.
>>CORRECT
If I keep and cure manners in the public, the other people realize keeping a manner makes people feel good.
>>If I keep and correct some manners in public, then other people might realize that keeping manners makes people feel good.
And the people also might want to do like that for other person.
>>Then, people might also want to do the same for other people.
Keeping manners look that it is for others but actually it returns to ourselves well.
>>Keeping our manner looks like it\'s for others but it\'s actually for ourselves as well.
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