Why are most chefs fat? Why do you think of this phenomenon?
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I think the most chefs fat is chefs make food so chefs oneself eat a food so they are fat and chefs is need to know new food so they are eat many food.
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Why are most chefs fat? Why do you think of this phenomenon?
I think the most chefs fat is chefs make food so chefs oneself eat a food so they are fat and chefs is need to know new food so they are eat many food.
>> I think the reason that most chefs are fat is that they make food themselves and eat a lot while preparing, experimenting, or cooking.
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