Why are movies like “The Lion King” ones kids watch over and over?

2019-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Sandy

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I think children love cute characters, and these attract kids to watch over and over. Also, they are not good at memorizing as adults, so they cannot remember many scenes. Even though they watched the same movies a lot, they would feel that they watch new scenes. In addition, children are very simple. They like repeating the same things. For example, I am volunteering in my church for young children. If I play the rock-paper-scissors with them, they never allow me to finish this game. It is very boring to me, but they love do only one thing they like. Likewise, they don\'t feel boring in watching movies like \"The Lion King\".

강사 첨삭

Hello Chloe! Thank you for the effort in answering your homework. It was nice meeting you today. I look forward to more classes with you and I will be pleased to help you out. You answered the question very well and you were able to explain using examples. Keep it up! Below are some of your corrections please take note and practice more. Have a [이름]derful day.

-Teacher Sandy-

I think children love cute characters, and these attract kids to watch over and over. 

>> Correct.
 Also, they are not good at memorizing as adults, so they cannot remember many scenes.

>> Also, they are not good with memorizing like adults, so they cannot remember many scenes.

Even though they watched the same movies a lot, they would feel that they watch new scenes. 

>> Even if they have already watched it many times they feel like they are watching a new scene.
 In addition, children are very simple.

>> Correct.

They like repeating the same things.

>> Correct.

For example, I am volunteering in my church for young children.

>> Correct.

If I play the rock-paper-scissors with them, they never allow me to finish this game.

>> If I play the rock- paper-scissors game with them , they will never allow me to end or finish the game.

 It is very boring to me, but they love do only one thing they like.

>> It is very boring for me but they love to do it over and over again.

 Likewise, they don\'t feel boring in watching movies like \"The Lion King\".

>> Likewise, they don\'t feel bored with watching movies like \"The Lion King.\"

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