Why are movies like “The Lion King” ones kids watch over and over?
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Back in the days of kids, I used to watch the animation called ‘little bee boongboong’ repeatedly.
>> Back when I was a child, I used to watch the animation called ‘little bee boongboong’ repeatedly.
The main character was a yellow car with black stripe which looks like a little bee.
>>Correct.
He always smiled and could go everywhere he wanted.
>> Correct.
In my memory, the ‘boongboong’ was so brave and also very cute that I wanted to meet him.
>> I clearly remember that the ‘boongboong’ was so brave and also very cute that I wanted to meet him.
Through the repetition, I’d learnt a lot from him and could set my ideal model.
>> Through the repetition, I have a learned a lot from him and could set a role model.
Which point makes me watch it repeatedly?
>>Correct.
At that time, I was very young and my brain was not that much developed.
>> Correct.
I’m not sure but I think, perhaps, my brain needed more stimulation that it could be matured.
>> Correct.
Also, through this process, I got satisfaction and obtained some achievements like learning words, phrases and what is good behavior.
>> Also, through this process, I got satisfaction and obtained some achievements like learning words, phrases and what a good behavior is.
This feeling naturally lead to watch that movie over and over again.
>> This feeling naturally lead me to watch that movie over and over again.
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