Why are people obsessed with appearance today?

Happy Friday [이름]!(\",)

Thank you once again for an excellent composition. I\'ve got a question for you though, do you also follow the latest trend?

See you in class!(\",)

~T. Lynn

First of all, a good appearance makes people gain confidence more.

>> First of all, a good appearance makes people gain more confidence.

Because people can be evaluated by their appearance, most of them try to look better. 

>> correct!
 For example, employees in the sales part usually wear nice suits and improve their appearance.

>> correct!

 It is because they have to meet many customers everyday for sale.

>> It is because they have to meet many customers everyday at work.
It\'s not a good way to evaluate people as ones\' first impression, but sometimes people need a good first impression to get benefits.
>> It\'s not a good way to evaluate people on their first impression, but sometimes people need a good first impression to get benefits. 
In addition, people want to look attractive like famous celibrities because they lead new trend and ones want to follow them. 

>> In addition, people want to look attractive like famous celebrities because they lead new trends and most people want to follow them. 
 When a famous celibrity wears treny clothes or beautiful accessaries, these are sold out the next day.

>> When a famous celebrity wears trendy clothes or beautiful accessories, these are sold out the next day.

Also, famous blogers post their cosmetics, clothes and accessaries on the internet website almost everyday, and publics want to buy those things to follow power blogers\' attractive appearances.
>> Also, famous blogers post their cosmetics, clothes and accessaries on the internet website almost everyday, and the public want to buy those things to follow power bloggers\' attractive appearances.
For these reasons, people try to take care of ones\' appearance today.

>> correct!