Why are people so scared of death?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s because they are afraid about the afterlife and they don\'t know death is very close with our life. Many people know someday human will die but they cannot accept it. It\'s because they didn\'t experience death. I also cannot accept it. So I am trying to be positive to forget about death. If we get death, I want to consider that death is natural thing.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daisy. ^^
Thank you for honestly answering this tough question. It is true that many of us are scared of death because we don\'t know what comes after it.
I love your perspective about death. It is true that it is a natural thing although it\'s difficult to accept it.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great afternoon.
See you again later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
Thank you for honestly answering this tough question. It is true that many of us are scared of death because we don\'t know what comes after it.
I love your perspective about death. It is true that it is a natural thing although it\'s difficult to accept it.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great afternoon.
See you again later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> It\'s because they are afraid about the afterlife and they don\'t know that there\'s a thin line between life and death.
Many people know someday human will die but they cannot accept it.
>> Many people know that all humans will eventually have to die but they cannot accept it.
It\'s because they didn\'t experience death.
>> [Do you mean]: It\'s because they haven\'t experienced death yet.
I also cannot accept it.
>> CORRECT!
So I am trying to be positive to forget about death.
>> CORRECT!
If we get death, I want to consider that death is natural thing.
>> If we have to die, I want to consider death as a natural thing.
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