Why are so many people against stem cell research?

2015-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Some insist that it is like an abortion because fertilized human eggs are destroyed in the process of harvesting embryonic stem cells for various medical purposes. The bottom line for conservatives is that stem cell research kills human life. In stark contrast to embryonic eggs being harvested for stem cells, using adult stem cells for research and development hardly has any opposition. The problem is that there are very little resources to extract from adult stem cells in the first place and the procedure is said to be very painful. At least for the moment, adult stem cells cannot be utilized and a long list of patients waiting to be rehabilitated by stem cell remedy have to gather more patience. Another controversy has reared its head recently, with several parties voicing out that, should stem cell research be approved, funded, and go into full swing, people might start charging for their stem cells in pretty much the same way organ donors buy body parts.

강사 첨삭

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Anyway, if stem cell will be approved, funded and go into full swing, it might cause some problems in the future.

We can discuss this further in class.

Teacher Nina


Some insist that it is like an abortion because fertilized human eggs are destroyed in the process of harvesting embryonic stem cells for various medical purposes.

>> correct

>> OR: Some people insist that it is like an abortion because fertilized human eggs are destroyed in the process of harvesting embryonic stem cells for various medical purposes.

The bottom line for conservatives is that stem cell research kills human life.

>> correct  

In stark contrast to embryonic eggs being harvested for stem cells, using adult stem cells for research and development hardly has any opposition.

>> correct  

The problem is that there are very little resources to extract from adult stem cells in the first place and the procedure is said to be very painful.

>> correct  

>> OR: The problem is that there are very little resources to extract it from adult stem cells in the first place. And the procedure is said to be very painful.

At least for the moment, adult stem cells cannot be utilized and a long list of patients waiting to be rehabilitated by stem cell remedy have to gather more patience.

>> correct 

>> OR: At least for the time being, adult stem cells cannot be utilized. And a long list of patients waiting to be rehabilitated by stem cell remedy have to be more patient.

Another controversy has reared its head recently, with several parties voicing out that, should stem cell research be approved, funded, and go into full swing, people might start charging for their stem cells in pretty much the same way organ donors buy body parts.

>> correct 

>> OR: Another controversy has reared its head recently, with several parties voicing out that, should stem cell research be approved, funded, and go into full swing. People might start charging for their stem cells in pretty much the same way organ donors buy body parts.


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