Why are so many people depressed nowadays? (ANSWER)

Hi, [이름]! 

Thank you for this wonderful essay. 

I felt like I was reading the answer of an adult rather than the answer of a teenager.

I\'m so proud of you because you have such point-of-view when it comes to this matter.

I hope your self-esteem never drops and always remember that if you fail once, it\'s not the end of the world.

Stay happy and safe.

See you later in class. ^^

~Teacher Charry

I think the reason that so many people depressed is \'Self-esteem drop.\'

>> I think the reason why so many people are depressed is, \'Self-esteem drop.\'

Many people feel dearessed with \'employment difficulty.\'

>> Many people feel depressed with \'employment difficulty.\'

People want to get a job in a company, but comoany only picks a few people.

>> People want to get a job in a company, but the company only picks a few people.

Therefore, some people experience failure.

>> CORRECT!

As a result, people\'s self- esteem will be dropped.

>> As a result, people\'s self- esteems drop.