Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their st
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Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?
I think the people who leave school early and have success are more confident and passionate to their future.
As they have confidence, they could quit their school without any reluctance.
Even if they don\'t took complete course, they could progress their work.
Also the media likes the person who have success story without good college degree.
They used to be spotlighted on the media than people who have good college degree.
That is why we think some people who leave school have big potential to be successful.
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Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?
I think the people who leave school early and have success are more confident and passionate to their future.
I think the people who leave school early and have success are more confident and passionate to their future.
>>> I think the people who leave school early and succeeded are more confident and passionate for their future.
As they have confidence, they could quit their school without any reluctance.
As they have confidence, they could quit their school without any reluctance.
>>> As they are confident, they could quit school without any reluctance.
Even if they don\'t took complete course, they could progress their work.
Even if they don\'t took complete course, they could progress their work.
>>> Even if they don\'t take complete course, they could be progressive at work.
Also, the media likes the person who has a successful story without good college degree.
Also, the media likes the person who has a successful story without good college degree.
>>> CORRECT
They used to be spotlighted on the media than people who have good college degrees.
They used to be spotlighted on the media than people who have good college degrees.
>>> CORRECT
That is why we think that some people who leave school early have big potential to be successful.
That is why we think that some people who leave school early have big potential to be successful.
>>> CORRECT
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