Why are some sports expensive? Are they for everyone?
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The reason could be heavy additional equipment requirement. Golf, for instance, requires players to have clubs, balls, bags, gloves, and other articles. Whereas there are some activities which have a shortage of trainers, so increased labor cost. These activities were not for everyone in the past, but now it is more open to the public thanks to local authorities\' support. Many governments are now subsidizing sports activities which have lowered the overall prices.
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The reason could be heavy additional equipment requirement. Golf, for instance, requires players to have clubs, balls, bags, gloves, and other articles.
>> correct
Whereas there are some activities which have a shortage of trainers, so increased labor cost.
>> Whereas there are some activities which have a shortage of trainers, so there\'s an increase in labor cost.
These activities were not for everyone in the past, but now it is more open to the public thanks to local authorities\' support. Many governments are now subsidizing sports activities which have lowered the overall prices.
>> correct
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