Why are the computers important?
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Because If we doesn\'t have the computers or laptop,
We can\'t study, we can\'t do Power English, we can\'t play games many things we can\'t do if we doesn\'t have a computer or a laptop.
And also we can\'t watch movie and surf for a internet.
That\'s why computers and laptops are impertant.
These are the reasons why the computers and laptops are important.
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Because If we doesn\'t have the computers or laptop,
We can\'t study, we can\'t do Power English, we can\'t play games many things we can\'t do if we doesn\'t have a computer or a laptop.
We can\'t study, we can\'t do Power English, we can\'t play games many things we can\'t do if we doesn\'t have a computer or a laptop.
>> It is important because if we don\'t have a computer or a laptop, we can\'t study, we can\'t do Power English classes, we can\'t play games, and many more. There are many things we can\'t do if we don\'t have a computer or a laptop.
And also we can\'t watch movie and surf for a internet.
>> We also can\'t watch movies or surf the internet.
That\'s why computers and laptops are impertant.
>> That\'s why computers and laptops are important.
These are the reasons why the computers and laptops are important.
>> CORRECT!
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