why are the trees are important?
학생이 쓴 원문
Trees are really important for us. First of all, trees give us a fresh oxygen.Tree drinks the carbon dioxde and give us an oxygen. Secondly, tree give us clean paper so we can write,draw,read.We can make an oak table,chairs and for an magnificent decoratoin. Also, it give us a cold shade at the summer time.Therefore we have to save tree.
Please save the trees.
you can do it
강사 첨삭
Hi there Min!
Happy Wednesday dear!
Wow! Another great and sensible composition from you. You never fail to amaze me by how deep your thinking is. Instead of playing, you think about saving trees, last time it was water, am I right?^__^
You are acting mature for your age and I\'m really proud of that being your English teacher.:)
Thank you for this composition. I\'ve made some modifications.
Have a great evening little lad.^_^
Please take care. Good night!
~Teacher Mayleen~
Trees are really important for us.
>> Trees are really important to us.
First of all, trees give us a fresh oxygen.
>> First of all, trees give off fresh oxygen.
Tree drinks the carbon dioxde and give us an oxygen.
>> Trees take in carbon dioxide and give us oxygen.
Secondly, tree give us clean paper so we can write,draw,read.
>> Secondly, trees are the source of clean papers which we use to write, draw, and read.
We can make an oak table,chairs and for an magnificent decoratoin.
>> We can make tables, chairs, and other magnificent decorations.
Also, it give us a cold shade at the summer time.
>> Also, trees provide us shade during summer.
Therefore we have to save tree.
>> Therefore, we have to save trees.
Please save the trees.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Please help save the trees.
you can do it
>> We can do it!
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