Why are you a good fit for this position?

2019-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

The first reason why I think I\'m suitable in the position is I like to communicate with others. I can talk with anybody without inconvenience and make them feel comfortable. The second reason is for my dream in the future. After 10 years later, I want to run my own company which imports or exports something. I think these plenty of experiences in current would be very helpful for me when I be the CEO in the future. To be a good CEO, I\'m trying to learn lots of things, like a marketing, pricing, sales and English speaking. Learning English is most difficult for me. Please help me. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Ellen!

Thank you for being consistent in making your composition homework despite your busy schedule. Keep up the good work! Please don\'t hesitate to ask me if you have any questions. I\'d like to help you any way I can. ^^

~~Teacher Kate

   

1. The first reason why I think I\'m suitable in the position is I like to communicate with others.

>>The first reason why I think I\'m suitable for the position is that I like to communicate with others.  

2. I can talk with anybody without inconvenience and make them feel comfortable.

>>I can talk with anybody effectively and I can make them feel comfortable.
3. The second reason is for my dream in the future.

>>The second reason is that I will do this for my dream for the future.

4. After 10 years later, I want to run my own company which imports or exports something. 

>>After 10 years, I want to run my own trading company.

5. I think these plenty of experiences in current would be very helpful for me when I be the CEO in the future.

>>I think my current experiences would be very helpful for me when I become a CEO in the future.

6. To be a good CEO, I\'m trying to learn lots of things, like a marketing, pricing, sales and English speaking.

>>To be a good CEO, I\'m trying to learn lots of things like marketing, pricing, sales, and even English.

7. Learning English is most difficult for me.

>>Learning English is the most difficult for me.

8. Please help me. 

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: Please help me reach my goals.

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