Why are you interested in your school?
학생이 쓴 원문
Fisrt, I\'m interested in playing board games with my friends whenever it is recess at my school. For example, we have Jrnga, Treambling monkeys and Doble. With Jenga , we can build something, with Trembling monkey we see whose monkey will survive, with Doble we play who gets may card.
Second, I am interested in our school math because I can do math very well and school math are easy so I like it. I can do plus, substraction, division and multiplication very well. I got a perfect score so my mom bought me a jelly.
Third, I\'m interested in school when I do a snack party and watch a movie at my sschool. That day, we bring a lot of snacks and drinks so we could share it to our friends during we watch a fun movie that our teacher picks. I have a lot of fun when I\'m in school.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ellie
Thank you for answering your homework as well~
I hope you had fun answering my question.
I also hope you had a great weekend.
See you in class~
Fisrt, I\'m interested in playing board games with my friends whenever it is recess at my school.
>>First, I\'m interested in playing board games with my friends during recess at school.
For example, we have Jrnga, Treambling monkeys and Doble.
>>Some examples are Jenga, Trembling monkeys, and Double.
With Jenga , we can build something, with Trembling monkey we see whose monkey will survive, with Doble we play who gets may card.
>>In Jenga, we can build things, in Trembling monkeys, we can see whose monkey will survive, and in Double we compete against the person who gets many cards.
>>Second, I am interested in the subject Math because I am very good at it and it is easy so I like it.
I can do plus, substraction, division and multiplication very well.
>>I can do addition, subtraction, division and multiplication very well.
I got a perfect score so my mom bought me a jelly.
>>I got a perfect score so my mom bought me jelly.
Third, I\'m interested in school when I do a snack party and watch a movie at my sschool.
>>Lastly, I am interested in school when I have a snack party and watch a movie.
That day, we bring a lot of snacks and drinks so we could share it to our friends during we watch a fun movie that our teacher picks.
>>During those days, we bring a lot of snacks and drinks so we could share it with our friends when we watch movies that our teacher picks.
I have a lot of fun when I\'m in school.
>>CORRECT
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