Why Bloomberg?

2022-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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The company\'s role in digital transformation motivates me the most. Bloomberg\'s service works as the intermediary role between technology and clients in the fast-paced financial market. Many clients depend on the terminal to deliver insight by connecting superficially unrelated events. Working in such an environment would allow me to devise an innovative approach that can go beyond my comfort zone. Expanding the learning curve for development opportunities is what I am looking for. Also, this environment would lead to global reach. Bloomberg\'s extensive customer base and product portfolio could pose a challenge that one person cannot tackle. Collaboration with different offices and teams would allow me to expand my network. Then I will seek to incorporate cultural perspectives when delivering solutions to clients. Therefore, I believe a multicultural relationship at Bloomberg would open an opportunity for me to provide a tailored approach to clients in a fast-paced financial market.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this Aciel!

 The company\'s role in digital transformation motivates me the most. 
>>> correct   
Bloomberg\'s service works as the intermediary role between technology and clients in the fast-paced financial market. 
>>> OR: Bloomberg\'s service plays an intermediary role between technology and clients in the fast-paced financial market.   
Many clients depend on the terminal to deliver insight by connecting superficially unrelated events. 
>>> correct   
Working in such an environment would allow me to devise an innovative approach that can go beyond my comfort zone. 
>>> correct   
Expanding the learning curve for development opportunities is what I am looking for. 
>>> correct   
Also, this environment would lead to global reach. 
>>> correct   
Bloomberg\'s extensive customer base and product portfolio could pose a challenge that one person cannot tackle. 
>>> correct   
Collaboration with different offices and teams would allow me to expand my network. 
>>> correct   
Then I will seek to incorporate cultural perspectives when delivering solutions to clients. 
>>> correct   
Therefore, I believe a multicultural relationship at Bloomberg would open an opportunity for me to provide a tailored approach to clients in a fast-paced financial market.
>>> correct   

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