Why Bloomberg? (Why did you choose to apply in Bloomberg?)

2022-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Bloomberg\'s intermediary role between finance and technology motivates me the most. First, Bloomberg leads digital transformation in the fast-paced financial market with diverse market data. Such information allows clients to ground their reasons, forecast their future projections, and navigate a unique way to tackle the problem by connecting seemingly unrelated data points. For instance, there is alternative data which in untraditional sources includes Google search volume and Twitter. Then, Bloomberg keeps updating its hardware and software to align with such digitization. There is a continuous update on monitors and keyboards to streamline and optimize clients\' workflow with increased efficiency. Also, by adopting call infrastructure, the company analyze call pattern to find the best solution for clients. I want to work in an innovative environment where I could convey the convenience and efficiency of the financial market of digitized financial market to client.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this Aciel!

Bloomberg\'s intermediary role between finance and technology motivates me the most. 
>>>  correct 
First, Bloomberg leads digital transformation in the fast-paced financial market with diverse market data. 
>>>   ORFirst, Bloomberg leads the digital transformation in the fast-paced financial market with diverse market data. 
Such information allows clients to ground their reasons, forecast their future projections, and navigate a unique way to tackle the problem by connecting seemingly unrelated data points. 
>>>  correct   
For instance, there is alternative data which in untraditional sources includes Google search volume and Twitter. 
>>For instance, there is an alternative data which in non-traditional sources includes Google search volume and Twitter.   
Then, Bloomberg keeps updating its hardware and software to align with such digitization. 
>>>  correct  
There is a continuous update on monitors and keyboards to streamline and optimize clients\' workflow with increased efficiency. 
>>>  correct  
Also, by adopting call infrastructure, the company analyze call pattern to find the best solution for clients. 
>>> correct   
I want to work in an innovative environment where I could convey the convenience and efficiency of the financial market of digitized financial market to client.
>>>  correct  

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