Why did the plane crash in Jeju?
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First of all, it\'s not Jeju but Muan airport many expert say landing gear is broke down but some people think it\'s because of bird strike.
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Why did the plane crash in Jeju?
First of all, it\'s not Jeju but Muan airport many expert say landing gear is broke down but some people think it\'s because of bird strike.
>> First of all, it\'s not Jeju but Muan Airport. Many experts say the landing gear broke down or malfunctioned but some people think it\'s because of a bird strike.
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