Why did you agree to practice your English regularly?
학생이 쓴 원문
I might be finished this topic of homework the day before yesterday.
Nowdays I am considering how to educate parents who are too obsessed their children\'s education.
This is one of the worst serious problems in Korea society.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for today\'s homework!
Please keep up the good work and continue expressing your thoughts!
Teacher ELLY.
Why did you agree to practice your English regularly?
I might be finished this topic of homework the day before yesterday.
>>I was able to finish this topic from my homework the day before yesterday.
Nowdays I am considering how to educate parents who are too obsessed their children\'s education.
>>Nowadays, I am considering on how to educate the parents who are too obsessed on their children\'s education.
This is one of the worst serious problems in Korea society.
>>I was able to finish this topic from my homework the day before yesterday.
Nowdays I am considering how to educate parents who are too obsessed their children\'s education.
>>Nowadays, I am considering on how to educate the parents who are too obsessed on their children\'s education.
This is one of the worst serious problems in Korea society.
>>This is one of the worst and serious problems in the Korean society.
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