Why did you choose your career/job?
학생이 쓴 원문
I thought If I does not choice professional job, I would have difficult in getting a job.
And I wanted to get a job straight after I graduate from colleage.
I have license so I am likely to work for a long time as long as I do not quit.
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>> I thought that if I would not choose a professional job, then I would have a difficulty in getting a job.
>> Or: I thought that if I would not choose a professional job, then it would be hard for me to have any other job.
And I wanted to get a job straight after I graduate from college.
And I wanted to get a job straight after I graduate from college.
>> CORRECT.
I have license so I am likely to work for a long time as long as I do not quit.
I have license so I am likely to work for a long time as long as I do not quit.
>> CORRECT.
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