Why did you retire early?
학생이 쓴 원문
I retired 2 years earlier before reaching retirement age in Korean government because I'd like to give my seat to a junior in my office. And also I could find an other proper job in Japan.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you so much for answering the question I gave you yesterday as your homework!
I really appreciate it a lot!
Your answers make sense!
Have a good morning and talk to you in a bit!
Teacher ELLY.
Essay question: \"Why did you retire early?\"
I retired 2 years earlier before reaching retirement age in Korean government
>>I retired 2 years earlier before reaching the retirement age set by the Korean government.
or>>I retired 2 years earlier before reaching the retirement age for Korean government employees.
because I\'d like to give my seat to a junior in my office.
>>Because I\'d like to give my seat to a junior in my office.
or>>Because I\'d like to give way to one of my juniors in the office.
And also I could find an other proper job in Japan.
>>And also I would like to find a new proper job in Japan.
Thank you so much for answering the question I gave you yesterday as your homework!
I really appreciate it a lot!
Your answers make sense!
Have a good morning and talk to you in a bit!
Teacher ELLY.
Essay question: \"Why did you retire early?\"
I retired 2 years earlier before reaching retirement age in Korean government
>>I retired 2 years earlier before reaching the retirement age set by the Korean government.
or>>I retired 2 years earlier before reaching the retirement age for Korean government employees.
because I\'d like to give my seat to a junior in my office.
>>Because I\'d like to give my seat to a junior in my office.
or>>Because I\'d like to give way to one of my juniors in the office.
And also I could find an other proper job in Japan.
>>And also I would like to find a new proper job in Japan.
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