Why do children like playing online games?
학생이 쓴 원문
Children likes online game, because oline game is good way at spend time.
And most of children play game for only fun.
For this reason, many children play game and like it.
But adult like game too.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Da [이름]~! ^^ Thanks for diligently doing your homework! Continue to be a kind student! Have a great week! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Children likes online game, because oline game is good way at spend time.
>>> Children like playing online games, because online games is a good way of spending time.
And most of children play game for only fun.
>>> Most children play games for fun.
For this reason, many children play game and like it.
For this reason, many children play game and like it.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
But adult like game too.
But adult like game too.
>>> But adults like playing online games too.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.