Why do humans across cultures create stories about magic?
학생이 쓴 원문
Since life can feel boring sometimes. Magic gives our creativity a playground. It lets us scratch that itch for the wild and amazing things that just don\'t happen in the real world. And It\'s because magic breaks our mind from the boring and it is unpredictable.
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Jean~~
Why do humans across cultures create stories about magic?
Since life can feel boring sometimes. Magic gives our creativity a playground.
>>> Since life can feel boring sometimes, magic gives our creativity a playground.
>>> OR: Life gets boring sometimes, and that’s why we turn to magic.
It lets us scratch that itch for the wild and amazing things that just don\'t happen in the real world. And it\'s because magic breaks our mind from the boring and it is unpredictable.
>>> OR: It gives our imagination room to play, lets us dream of things that never happen in real life, and keeps us excited because it’s unpredictable.
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