Why do many people from different parts of the world want to improve their English?

2022-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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Why do many people from different parts of the world want to improve their English? Because English is the most using language in the world. For example, in a workplace, if that company is a global one, we have to speak English when we have a meeting. Also, it could be an advantage to find a better job. Also, in Korea, most of industry is import and export, so it is essential to speak English. Although I don\'t speak English very well, I can find another job as well. However, most of things are English. So we have to study English harder!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] Su!

Thank you for doing your homework! I agree, learning English can open a lot of opportunities not only in one\'s own country but globally.

-T. Caitlyn

Why do many people from different parts of the world want to improve their English?
>>CORRECT
Because English is the most using language in the world.

>>English is the most used language around the world.

For example, in a workplace, if that company is a global one, we have to speak English when we have a meeting.

>> For example, in a global companies, they have to speak in English when having meetings.

Also, it could be an advantage to find a better job.

>> It could also be advantageous in finding better job opportunities.

Also, in Korea, most of industry is import and export,

>> Also, In Korea, the industry is into foreign trade.

so it is essential to speak English.

>>CORRECT
Although I don\'t speak English very well,

>>CORRECT

I can find another job as well.

>>There are also job opportunities for me.

However, most of things are English.

>>However, better opportunities will be available if I can be fluent in English.

So we have to study English harder!

>>CORRECT

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