Why do many people from different parts of the world want to improve their English?
학생이 쓴 원문
If learn English then can enjoy many benefits. Many information was written in English so, we can gather the information that good quality and quantity. And can meet various people.
강사 첨삭
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I totally agree with you when you said that there are a lot of benefits in learning English. I hope you continuously practice and find English fun and enjoyable.
-T. Caitlyn
If learn English then can enjoy many benefits.
>> If we learn English, we can enjoy it\'s benefits.
Many information was written in English so, we can gather the information that good quality and quantity.
>> A lot of information were written in English so we can gather more accurate quantitative and qualitative information.
And can meet various people.
>> CORRECT
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