Why do many people from different parts of the world want to improve their English?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because, English is common language in the world.
USA is still most powerful country in the world.
We live in the world that they made.
So, we learn English.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. Thank you for diligently doing your homework. It just shows how determined you are in learning English. Keep up the good work and see you on Monday! ^^
-T. Julia
Because, English is common language in the world.
>> People from different parts of the world want to improve their English because English is a common language in the world.
USA is still most powerful country in the world.
>> The USA is still the most powerful country in the world.
We live in the world that they made. So, we learn English.
>> We live in the world that they made, that\'s why we learn English.
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