Why do many people from different parts of the world want to improve their English?
학생이 쓴 원문
English is not only for English and America. it\'s a global language.
The world is too close recently, because developing communication technology.
so, we use English more than in the past.
That\'s why everyone want to improve their English skills.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
English is not only for English and America. it\'s a global language.
>> English is not only for England and America; it is a global language.
The world is too close recently, because developing communication technology.
>> The world has become much closer recently because of developing communication technologies.
so, we use English more than in the past.
>> As a result, we use English more than in the past.
That\'s why everyone want to improve their English skills.
>> That’s why everyone wants to improve their English skills.
>> English is not only for England and America; it is a global language.
The world is too close recently, because developing communication technology.
>> The world has become much closer recently because of developing communication technologies.
so, we use English more than in the past.
>> As a result, we use English more than in the past.
That\'s why everyone want to improve their English skills.
>> That’s why everyone wants to improve their English skills.
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