Why do most people think that healthy food is not delicious?
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I think most people think healthy food is not delicious that most healthy food are vegetables and bland food.
For example, Broccoli, almond and carrot and so on.....but I like healthy food because healthy food is deliciousヽ(・∀・)ノヽ(・∀・)ノ
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Why do most people think that healthy food is not delicious?
I think most people think healthy food is not delicious that most healthy food are vegetables and bland food.
>> I think most people think healthy food is mostly vegetables so it\'s not delicious but bland.
For example, Broccoli, almond and carrot and so on.....but I like healthy food because healthy food is delicious.
>> For example, broccoli, almond, carrot, and so on.....but I like healthy food because it is delicious.
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