Why do people borrow from bank?

2020-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

It is barely to have a good job. So young people lend on student loans and a living expense from bank.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Bella!

Thank you for submitting your answer.
I think it is the same around the world.
It is really hard to get a good job especially for young people.
I hope that they will have better opportunities in life so that they will not be forced in getting loans.

~Teacher Gina 

It is barely to have a good job.
>> It is rare to have a good job.
So young people lend on student loans and a living expense from bank.
>> So young people borrow for student loans and living expenses from banks.

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